I like the Tai-chi-like and time-and-space travel genre. This game is very interesting, has a great start, and has a lot of potential. Nobody has started AVN with these topics!
Here are some constructive feedback: 1) Music choice and placement. Sometimes, the absence of music slightly took me out of the immersive story. 2) Character development and world-building could be a little bit more exquisite. For instance, I'm interested in seeing the girls' backstories in this "Sect" world, including the experiences and challenges they have undergone. I also wish that I could see more details in the Qi elevation progress, which is a great opportunity for the main character's growth and development. The conversations are great and straightforward. However, they could be smoother with better word choice. Perhaps the reason is you are not a native English speaker (based on my instinct), which is okay. Maybe you could ask AVN developers who excel at this. I recommend reach out to Caribdis (Eternum's developer), Niichan (My Bully Is My Lover's developer), and/or KatanaVN (Fate's Collide's developer). They have solid writing skills. I can mention your game to Cari if you'd like.
3) Please proofread and fix some grammatical errors and typos, like this one.
I'm looking forward to the next update (0.2)! If 0.2 turns out to be , I will help advertise this game to more people. Your work of art should deserve more attention!
Thank you for your feedback. This is my first AVN, and I’m still familiarizing myself with many aspects of it. Feedback like yours is greatly appreciated, as it helps me know where to improve.
My comments would be that you focus on adding music during the game scenes, I feel it strange without music, but when there is music I feel that atmosphere as if we were in that moment.
The other comment would be the transactions between the renders, images, game scenes or whatever they are called, they are not smoothed (the sudden transition from one image to another in less than 1 second) (I don't know how much the value would be for that whether the transition is abrupt or not)
Due to my poor understanding of the Bing video in Unreal Engine, the videos are not properly packaged. But i'm switching to Ren'py, the video issue and many more about performance will be resolve .
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really like the starting, reminds me the 80's Chinese old games, the action scenes are perfect too
Thanks for the kind words. Glad that you like it
I like the Tai-chi-like and time-and-space travel genre. This game is very interesting, has a great start, and has a lot of potential. Nobody has started AVN with these topics!
Here are some constructive feedback:
1) Music choice and placement. Sometimes, the absence of music slightly took me out of the immersive story.
2) Character development and world-building could be a little bit more exquisite.
For instance, I'm interested in seeing the girls' backstories in this "Sect" world, including the experiences and challenges they have undergone. I also wish that I could see more details in the Qi elevation progress, which is a great opportunity for the main character's growth and development.
The conversations are great and straightforward. However, they could be smoother with better word choice. Perhaps the reason is you are not a native English speaker (based on my instinct), which is okay. Maybe you could ask AVN developers who excel at this. I recommend reach out to Caribdis (Eternum's developer), Niichan (My Bully Is My Lover's developer), and/or KatanaVN (Fate's Collide's developer). They have solid writing skills. I can mention your game to Cari if you'd like.
3) Please proofread and fix some grammatical errors and typos, like this one.
I'm looking forward to the next update (0.2)! If 0.2 turns out to be , I will help advertise this game to more people. Your work of art should deserve more attention!
Thank you for your feedback. This is my first AVN, and I’m still familiarizing myself with many aspects of it. Feedback like yours is greatly appreciated, as it helps me know where to improve.
Take me money 🤑
Will this game have the path of evil in addition to the path of good? (I'm still very early in the game but I'm curious)
The game has very good potential.
My comments would be that you focus on adding music during the game scenes, I feel it strange without music, but when there is music I feel that atmosphere as if we were in that moment.
The other comment would be the transactions between the renders, images, game scenes or whatever they are called, they are not smoothed (the sudden transition from one image to another in less than 1 second) (I don't know how much the value would be for that whether the transition is abrupt or not)
Agreed. Eternum and My Bully is My Lover are great story-focused games, and their excellent choice of music is a great contributor to their success.
What are the future tags for this?
Ren'py Engine when
Today, soon.
I really do like the idea and the fighting scenes especially the first one look really nice.
Only problem, it seems like the animations dont play on my mashine wich is really sad.
Glad that you like it.
Due to my poor understanding of the Bing video in Unreal Engine, the videos are not properly packaged. But i'm switching to Ren'py, the video issue and many more about performance will be resolve .
Ho~ A cultivation type of harem game? Nice, very nice~